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 ## Overview
 
-The persistence thread receives commit batches from the main processing pipeline (via ThreadPipeline interface) and uploads them to S3. The transport layer uses a single-threaded TCP client with connection pooling, leaving protocol details (HTTP, authentication, etc.) to higher layers.
+The persistence thread receives commit batches from the main processing pipeline and uploads them to S3. It uses a single-threaded design with connection pooling and batching for optimal performance.
 
-## Core Flow
+## Architecture
 
-The persistence thread operates in a loop with integrated connection management and batching logic. Batches are triggered when any limit is reached: time (`batch_timeout_ms`) or size (`batch_size_threshold`). Flow control via `max_in_flight_requests` prevents new batches when at capacity.
+**Input**: Commits arrive via `ThreadPipeline` interface from upstream processing
+**Output**: Batched commits uploaded to S3 persistence backend
+**Transport**: Single-threaded TCP client with connection pooling
+**Protocol**: Higher layers handle HTTP, authentication, and S3-specific details
 
-### Main Loop
+## Batching Strategy
 
-1. **Batch Acquisition** - Use `ThreadPipeline::acquire()` to get commit batches:
-   - If no in-flight requests: acquire blocking and process immediately
-   - If in-flight requests exist: collect commits until any trigger condition:
-     - **Time limit**: `batch_timeout_ms` elapsed since last batch sent
-     - **Size limit**: `batch_size_threshold` commits collected
-     - **Flow control**: at `max_in_flight_requests`, block until reply received
-   - Use epoll_wait with timeout for I/O event handling during collection
-   - If no commits available and no in-flight requests, switch to blocking acquire
+The persistence thread collects commits into batches using two trigger conditions:
 
-2. **Connection Management** - Acquire healthy connection from pool:
-   - Create new connections if pool below `target_pool_size`
-   - If no healthy connections available, block until one becomes available
-   - Maintain automatic pool replenishment
+1. **Time Trigger**: `batch_timeout_ms` elapsed since batch collection started
+2. **Size Trigger**: `batch_size_threshold` commits collected (can be exceeded by final commit)
 
-3. **Data Transmission** - Send batch to S3:
-   - Write protocol data to connection
-   - Publish accepted transactions to subscriber system
-   - Track in-flight requests for flow control
+**Flow Control**: When `max_in_flight_requests` reached, block until responses received.
 
-4. **Event Processing** - Drive I/O and monitor health:
-   - Handle epoll events for all in-flight connections
-   - Monitor connection health via heartbeats
-   - Process responses and detect failures
+## Main Processing Loop
 
-5. **Response Handling** - Process successful persistence:
-   - Only acknowledge batch if all prior batches are durable (ordered acknowledgment)
-   - Release batch via StageGuard destructor (publishes to next pipeline stage)
-   - Publish durability events to subscriber system
-   - Return healthy connection to pool
+### 1. Batch Collection
 
-6. **Failure Handling** - Manage connection failures:
-   - Remove failed connection from pool
-   - Retry batch with exponential backoff (up to `max_retry_attempts`)
-   - Exponential backoff delays only affect the specific failing batch
-   - If retries exhausted, abort process or escalate error
-   - Initiate pool replenishment if below target
+**No In-Flight Requests**:
+- Use blocking acquire to get first commit batch
+- Process immediately (no batching delay)
 
-### Connection Pool
+**With In-Flight Requests**:
+- Check flow control: if at `max_in_flight_requests`, block for responses
+- Collect commits using non-blocking acquire until trigger condition:
+  - Check for available commits (non-blocking)
+  - If `batch_size_threshold` reached → process batch immediately
+  - If below threshold → use `epoll_wait(batch_timeout_ms)` for I/O and timeout
+  - On timeout → process collected commits
+- If no commits available and no in-flight requests → switch to blocking acquire
 
-Maintains `target_pool_size` connections with automatic replenishment. Pool sizing should be 2x `max_in_flight_requests` to ensure availability during peak load and connection replacement scenarios.
+### 2. Connection Management
 
-## Implementation Considerations
+- Acquire healthy connection from pool
+- Create new connections if pool below `target_pool_size`
+- If no healthy connections available, block until one becomes available
+- Maintain automatic pool replenishment
 
-**Batch Ordering**: Batches can be retried out-of-order for performance, but acknowledgment to the next pipeline stage must maintain ordering - a batch can only be acknowledged after all prior batches are durable.
+### 3. Data Transmission
 
-**Backpressure**: Retry delays for individual batches naturally create backpressure that eventually blocks the persistence thread when in-flight limits are reached.
+- Write batch data to S3 connection using appropriate protocol
+- Publish accepted transactions to subscriber system
+- Track request as in-flight for flow control
 
-**Graceful Shutdown**: On shutdown signal, drain all in-flight batches to completion before terminating the persistence thread.
+### 4. I/O Event Processing
 
-## Configurable Parameters
+- Handle epoll events for all in-flight connections
+- Monitor connection health via heartbeats
+- Process incoming responses and detect connection failures
 
-- **`batch_timeout_ms`** (default: 5ms) - Maximum time to wait collecting additional commits for batching
-- **`batch_size_threshold`** - Threshold for triggering batch processing
-- **`max_in_flight_requests`** - Maximum number of concurrent requests to persistence backend
-- **`target_pool_size`** (recommended: 2x `max_in_flight_requests`) - Target number of connections to maintain in pool
-- **`max_retry_attempts`** (default: 3) - Maximum retries for failed batches before aborting
-- **`retry_base_delay_ms`** (default: 100ms) - Base delay for exponential backoff retries
+### 5. Response Handling
+
+- **Ordered Acknowledgment**: Only acknowledge batch after all prior batches are durable
+- Release batch via `StageGuard` destructor (publishes to next pipeline stage)
+- Publish durability events to subscriber system
+- Return healthy connection to pool
+
+### 6. Failure Handling
+
+- Remove failed connection from pool
+- Retry batch with exponential backoff (up to `max_retry_attempts`)
+- Backoff delays only affect the specific failing batch
+- If retries exhausted, abort process or escalate error
+- Initiate pool replenishment if below target
+
+## Connection Pool
+
+**Target Size**: `target_pool_size` connections (recommended: 2x `max_in_flight_requests`)
+**Replenishment**: Automatic creation when below target
+**Health Monitoring**: Heartbeat-based connection validation
+**Sizing Rationale**: 2x multiplier ensures availability during peak load and connection replacement
+
+## Key Design Properties
+
+**Batch Ordering**: Batches may be retried out-of-order for performance, but acknowledgment to next pipeline stage maintains strict ordering.
+
+**Backpressure**: Retry delays for failing batches create natural backpressure that eventually blocks the persistence thread when in-flight limits are reached.
+
+**Graceful Shutdown**: On shutdown signal, drain all in-flight batches to completion before terminating.
+
+## Configuration Parameters
+
+| Parameter | Default | Description |
+|-----------|---------|-------------|
+| `batch_timeout_ms` | 5ms | Maximum time to wait collecting commits for batching |
+| `batch_size_threshold` | - | Threshold for triggering batch processing |
+| `max_in_flight_requests` | - | Maximum concurrent requests to persistence backend |
+| `target_pool_size` | 2x in-flight | Target number of connections to maintain |
+| `max_retry_attempts` | 3 | Maximum retries for failed batches before aborting |
+| `retry_base_delay_ms` | 100ms | Base delay for exponential backoff retries |
 
 ## Configuration Validation
 
-The following validation rules should be enforced:
+**Required Constraints**:
+- `batch_size_threshold` > 0 (must process at least one commit per batch)
+- `max_in_flight_requests` > 0 (must allow at least one concurrent request)
+- `target_pool_size` >= `max_in_flight_requests` (pool must accommodate all in-flight requests)
+- `batch_timeout_ms` > 0 (timeout must be positive)
+- `max_retry_attempts` >= 0 (zero disables retries)
+- `retry_base_delay_ms` > 0 (delay must be positive if retries enabled)
 
-- **`batch_size_threshold`** > 0 (must process at least one commit per batch)
-- **`max_in_flight_requests`** > 0 (must allow at least one concurrent request)
-- **`target_pool_size`** >= `max_in_flight_requests` (pool must accommodate all in-flight requests)
-- **`target_pool_size`** <= 2x `max_in_flight_requests` (recommended for optimal performance)
-- **`batch_timeout_ms`** > 0 (timeout must be positive)
-- **`max_retry_attempts`** >= 0 (zero disables retries)
-- **`retry_base_delay_ms`** > 0 (delay must be positive if retries enabled)
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+**Performance Recommendations**:
+- `target_pool_size` <= 2x `max_in_flight_requests` (optimal for performance)